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![]() #2. I might like it better without the yellow planchet (or perhaps with the planchet replaced by a thin-walled box). A very clever design idea, the best visualization I've seen of the bazaar style of development. Probably my second favorite of the ones I've seen so far. ![]() #3. Simple, elegant, should scale very well. ![]() #4. Better contrast than the old versions, so this one works better. I don't think it passes the letterhead test, though. ![]() #7. My favorite design in the lot, so far. The suggestions of opened circle and of a keyhole are good. The iconography isn't as clever as #2 but pulls ahead on the ``would it look good on a letterhead'' test. `Open source' should be two words. I'd like to see a variant of this with a font similar to the one used in #4 or #8. ![]() #8. Nicely done (and I like the font choice) but people are going to look at it and think ``biotechnology company''. ![]() #11. This is actually four proposals in one field. They're not exciting, and come very close to being disqualified by too much reliance on the "open source" letterforms. ![]() #45. Clever idea. Borderline on the "relies too much on text" test. ![]() #50. Nice visual idea, but the iconography is weak. ![]() #54. Another clever idea that's borderline on the "relies on text too much" test. ![]() #64. The thumbnail has too many colors, but there's a usable greyscale version. I like the large versions. #76. What is that thing above the letters? Looks like a cigarette burning. ![]() #78. Technically within the rules, but ugly. ![]() #80. Technically within the rules, but ugly. Would look a lot better with a text color other than fluorescent green! ![]() #84. What planet was this guy from? :-) ![]() #85. Nice iconocraphy. Veers close to depending too much on letter forms, but would still make visual sense with `pen source' removed. ![]() #90. Again, close to depending too much on letter forms. Very like 105, which I think is slightly better iconography. ![]() #95. Very nice indeed, but maybe too much like the Ralston Purina logo. ![]() #96. Is that a sunrise? A pipe organ? ![]() #98. An inferior (IMO) take on #7. The lettering is hard to read at thumbnail size. ![]() #99. What's the relevance of a dancing human figure? ![]() #100. This one is very good, up there with #7/#2/#1/#3. ![]() #101. Open arms, open source -- I get it. May look a bit too much like someone dancing or praying, though. ![]() #105. Better variant of #90, still close to depending too much on letter forms. ![]() #108. Monochrome take on #2. Not bad but apt to fade into the background. I think adding a second graphic element in the form of the open O was a mistake. It's just distracting. ![]() #109. Looks too much like something you'd break security with. ![]() #111. Looks like a compass rose, almost nautical. ![]() #119. Perhaps too abstract, but strangely pleasing. ![]() #125. Borderline; caption text almost diappears. (This could be fixed, though). ![]() #126. I don't think this one passes the letterhead test. ![]() #131. Clever idea, but the execution is kind of ugly. ![]() #134. An interesting abstract, iconographically weak though. ![]() #137. Clever attempt to simplify #1. As with #108 I think adding a second graphic element in the form of the open O was a mistake, though. It's just distracting. #138. Doesn't look good at thumbnail size. ![]() #139. Nice idea. Purple and brown probably are not the optimal colors, though. |